Drawn To The Light. Dunedin, Otago, New Zealand
The St Clair’s Piles, St Clair Beach. Taken by Nigel Cowburn 31 January 2019
My husband Nigel took this fabulous photo when he was on the beach at sunset, at St Clair. I love the view of the piles seen against the esplanade lights reflected in the wet sand. In fact, I was moved to write a poem and also invited Damien B. Donnelly to do the same. Damien lives far away, in Paris, and yet he wrote a remarkably perceptive poem. Here both poems are published together, with Nigel’s photo.
Nigel works as a Landscape Architect and blogs at Growplan
Survivors
— Poem by Liz Cowburn
[piles’ perspective]
Sentinals of the sand,
we stand
Driven deep to defend
this beach
Regimental relics – we resist,
persist
Fight for footing! Look to the land,
the sand!
*****
[my perspective]
Battered, beaten by tidal terrors ‘the breakers’
— bowed but not cowed
Centred in a century’s swirling currents,
St Clair’s piles sink, subside…
Yet… THESE SURVIVE !!!
THE WEIGHT UPON THE WAVES
— Poem by Damien B. Donnelly
And in the tide
tight with time and its turning
they left their posts,
impaled upon the sand,
impressed upon the land.
And there they stood
ten in heart and ten in tide
for time to tend,
impaled upon mind,
impressed upon mankind.
And on they marched
up the land and on from shore
for evermore
impaled upon their wain,
impressed upon the flame.
And out with wave
woe on water and touch from time,
tormented years
impaled upon the crest,
impressed upon the chest.
And on they went
refugees in search of root
swept along the shore
impaled upon with tears,
impressed upon with fears.
And on it goes
those who run and those who can stay
and those who are lost,
impaled upon the wars,
impressed upon the waves.
All words by Damien B. Donnelly
Damien blogs at: Deuxiemepeau; Picturing Poetry by Damien B. Donnelly
Link to view the poem on Damien’s blog: The Weight Upon The Waves
Notes on Damien’s poem
The reference to refugees made a big impression on me. In April 2016 Dunedin accepted their first group of Syrian refugees. Damien wouldn’t have been aware of this when he wrote the poem; I told him later via Comments at his site – the following was his response:
“When I saw the piles and the lights heading off inland in the distance a journey immediately came to mind, the struggle of those who survived, who carry the flames of the hope and the souls of the past; those who were left behind or lost on the journey, the hills we all have to climb and the oceans too many have to cross to seek refuge, I am so glad to hear how Dunedin opened its gates to welcome in a new hope. I think our global commonality is that we are all refugees looking for our place in the world, just some of us have it much easier and a more comfortable journey than others.”
— Damien B. Donnelly (conversation via Comments)
Posted by Liz; Dancing In The Current (2019)
This is wonderful Liz. I am so happy to see our words and visions all combined here. A terrific trinity of thought. I love how you offer the two perspectives; one standing strong to defend, resist and the other seeing all they have had to endure. I will post a link on my blog to this if that’s okay so that everyone gets to appreciate your poem too. This has brought an extra ray of sunshine to an already surprisingly spring filled sunny Saturday that is now setting.
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Please do! I’m glad you enjoyed seeing this and it made me happy too once it came together! Conversely to you, we are getting surprisingly cool autumn weather and really its a bit early for that.
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A stunning collaboration–photo and poems–a sort of meeting of souls.
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Thank you very much.. it was really special the way this came together!
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Poetry can put into words deeper meanings from what we see on the face of things. It is a strength of good poetry, and good poets, this ability to take the reader to another place they never imagined could be associated with, for example, a simple object, or objects. This is what is happening with the three poems above. Great to see how the poems and lines interact with each other and bring in different dimensions, ideas and themes. I’ve always thought the piles looked like armoured soldiers or knights marching towards the dunes. At present, sadly, fallen soldiers. It’s interesting to see this same idea touched on in the poems. Thank you both, Liz and Damien.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to visit after my invite Kay and I’m just really delighted to read your generous comment. Its greatly appreciated, and a big encouragement!
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Apologies if I become grounds for combat—but that superb photo stands alone and no words can either enhance nor do it justice.
Kudos to the photographer~!
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You won’t start a war.. Nigel will happily accept yet another compliment and I’ll be delighted to pass it on 🙂
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Not a Leo, by any chance, is he?
Boom boom!
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No chance, not a Leo!
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Hah! We Leos love to modestly bask in our well deserved glory—but in all seriosity, that is one stunning shot!
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Thanks very much, he’ll be so encouraged by your response! I’d previously posted it several times on Exploring Colour along with other wonderful images he took that evening. This was the stand-out shot but he got a really fiery sunset that evening too. If you click on this link you’ll be able to choose any you’d like to see: https://exploringcolour.wordpress.com/?s=clair
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THE WORDS ARE LIKE THE CLOUDS IN THE SKY, LOVE THE SITE LIZ, CHINA
china.alexandria@livingthedream.blog
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